rage

Posted by liiza at 12:27 AM



Its eating me up inside

And leaving me with no one beside

No one understands me

Or this rage they often see

I hate who I’m becoming

But can’t help the fuming

There’s a trapped person within

With no conscience no feeling

Wanting to be set free

If only i could do that so that I can just be me

The person I want to be

And not the stranger I see in the mirror

 

17 Comments:

  1. jellybean said...
    October 28, 2007 at 12:30 AM  
    i lurrrv dis one...kewl n touchin :)
    pOmPi said...
    October 28, 2007 at 2:04 AM  
    hehe..nice one..somewhat resembles whats happening to that kid i wrote about in my blog..heheh :D...anyways keep the rage calm and just be yourself...blah blah
    ~ange|~ said...
    October 28, 2007 at 5:52 AM  
    nice:D
    Iya said...
    October 28, 2007 at 10:19 PM  
    hey its me, the "typical red blooded male". interesting stuff you have here. makes me wonder... hmmm... interesting... *musing look*
    liiza said...
    October 29, 2007 at 4:30 AM  
    jellybean- i know you will love any crap i write :P thanks anyway, luurve ya. ps: finally comment kuran engijje dho!

    pompi- yea i try i try :( hehe atleast it inspires me to write...correction, it inspires me to 'try' to write..*blushes*. thanks for commenting.

    angel- thnks :D

    vicinity of obscenity aka 'typcal red blooded male'- me wonders what you are wondering...hmmmm
    ab said...
    October 29, 2007 at 4:56 AM  
    No no... Let the rage out!! Conquer the world! ;)
    Anonymous said...
    October 29, 2007 at 5:24 AM  
    hmmm i think u somehow managed to creep into my my mind nd copy all my thoughts into writing. cheeeerss.h
    Anonymous said...
    October 29, 2007 at 5:28 AM  
    so u started bloggin n forgot to mention dat unimportant fact to me eh?
    some best friend u are!
    anyway, nice poem...keep em coming!
    liiza said...
    October 29, 2007 at 6:24 AM  
    morinho- anyone hu duznt feel the rage in this dullsville isnt normal :D

    sacred silence : hey u r d one hu pushed me to dis so i cudnt have let u down :) *hugzz* thanks for commenting.
    liiza said...
    October 29, 2007 at 6:26 AM  
    waylander - thanks for the advice :)
    jellybean said...
    October 29, 2007 at 6:52 AM  
    i jst read it again O_o
    i just luv it ..
    kekekekekekeke
    mwaks
    iecco said...
    October 29, 2007 at 7:22 AM  
    let em out!!
    then at least u are gonna get some part of the 'u' u wana be not the stranger staring back at u!
    gluck!
    Anonymous said...
    October 29, 2007 at 11:03 AM  
    nice poem, we need not be stuck inside, i also go through that phase now and then..heh..be strong and just face everything, you know you are stronger than you think...hmm..have a great life...
    liiza said...
    November 1, 2007 at 1:46 AM  
    i-kko- wish it was dat easy..but thanks for the comment
    xaoc- i dont know about strong but yeah i ges we never know our limits until they are pushed. thanks.
    Anonymous said...
    November 2, 2007 at 4:27 AM  
    at the moment im havin a lot of rage inside me, ur poem, conveys my fylings tooooo. nice tht u wrote :)
    Anonymous said...
    November 2, 2007 at 6:39 AM  
    "and should it seem peculiar
    that i only confide to my inner soul..
    to mend from within that empty hole.." ..beautifully expressed!!.. gotta agree with mai..i guess we all go through this "not so happening" phase sometime or the other.. can see a lot of ppl can connect to this poem..
    liiza said...
    November 3, 2007 at 1:03 AM  
    mai- u n rage?? O.O
    sam- kinda confused as to which poem u r referring to but if it is rage, yea it seems a lot ppl can connect to it. thanks for d comment :)

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