the not-so-perfect man



I still remember the day
You looked at me and i was blown away
Your smile was shy yet sweet
And i thought a person like you i'd never meet

Soon we were dating
Your every reaction had me debating
I was nervous but you were too
though at that time i didnt have a clue
your every glance stopped and stole my breath
But you were clever to hide your eyes of its depth

Days passed on and we became lovers
you were holding my hand and buying me flowers
we joke, cuddle, kiss and hug
and everytime you confide in me, you make my heart tug

I want to be your best friend
Be with you till the very end
even if its a cliche its what i feel
and i know you wont scoff at what i believe

You take me to your place
and you never knew how you had my heart race
as you pull me closer to you
knowing i was feeling what you were feeling too
and we didnt know how time went by
until the clock stroke and it was time to say goodbye

Now, i lie in bed awake
wondering how to unravel my mistake
for i was the one to blame
even though you played the game
and as i feel the new life inside me
i wonder how blind had i been to not see
That someone so perfect could not be
For he certainly was not the man i thought was he

26 Comments:

  1. Anonymous said...
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    jellybean said...
    mi kon commet ehthah delet kofa meeneee
    jellybean said...
    eyyyyy is dat u btw? nice
    liiza said...
    jellybean- is dat me hey? pspsps u think my hair is blonde and i wear sneakers?? *sigh*
    pOmPi said...
    WOW!! speachless atm..just WOW!! .. obi noave ey bune veynee..this poem rocks..
    liiza said...
    pompi- thanks man :D
    Anonymous said...
    god my friend is a great poet!!!! n i discovered tht just now. its realy nice, conveyin lot of emotions. i realy luv it
    Anonymous said...
    so now we now wat someone has been upto very conveniently skipping college!!;)..inspiring poetry!!..keep it flowing!!
    ab said...
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    ab said...
    Awesome!!! Really inspirin! :D
    liiza said...
    mai, sam and waylander - thanks :D
    Anonymous said...
    wow... O.o awesomeness. love them poem.
    Anonymous said...
    oops i meant love THE poem >_< darn typo errors
    liiza said...
    thanks :)
    iecco said...
    awesome liiza u are truly a poet i loved every bit of ur post!! brilliant!
    Unknown said...
    woowww..nice one..love the poem :)
    liiza said...
    i-kko and schaffu- thenkooo ^_^
    jellybean said...
    eyyyyyyyy mi ah ekani thah comment kuran v *hmph*
    ehen post eh hadhan vehje eh nu mihaaru
    dis one is nice
    lekekekekekkee
    Iya said...
    sounds like someone was knocked up. i feel sorry for this fictional character who got knocked up. she should have used protection. or perhaps had "intimate encounters" with a half competent prick who knew when to pull out.

    i guess pobodys nerfect.
    liiza said...
    yep and it IS a fictional character by the way! to everyone hu read it. dont want ppl inwardly wondering whether it hpnd to me..o_O d horror! if it DID hapn to me, i would b planning various ways to torture d guy to death, not writing poems :D there now, satisfied much, mai?
    callι guяl said...
    wow. just wow. awesome poem.
    Shaari said...
    thank god it aint about u...
    grynfIre said...
    my fav one yet. n since u're in prime wound up stage now why dont u vent ur frustrations on a couple more of these? ehehehe.. aslu keep em comin girl they're v salhi
    pOmPi said...
    no more articles from u?
    DarkCasanova said...
    a deep and meaningfull poem..

    no worries there are plenty of great guys out there(like me lol) u'll meet one sumday n u'll then write even a more beautiful peom than this :)
    liiza said...
    thanks... dark casanova. hehe

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